room full of sound.
But I feel a little lonely.
Busy bodies everywhere,
Do any of them really care?
I still feel a little lonely.
'Great job', 'good work.'
Words, words, words.
I still feel a little lonely.
Hundreds of eyes,
a loud applause.
But I still feel a little lonely.
Eyes meet, hands touch-
the last dance is danced.
I'm not so lonely anymore.
Glances come, we don't care-
our world is complete again.
I'm home, and lonely is gone.
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This is a piece I did for a creative challenge given by a Vicki of 'Simply Hue'
Not completely in love with it. Did it pretty fast and didn't put much into it. It's kind of messy and thrown together. But I still like it and shall claim it as my work :)
Would love to hear thoughts on either piece!
Question of the post: (caution: it's a tough one…)
Favorite disney pixar film?
I don't think I could even answer this one… *sigh*
-J
I think my favorite is "UP" ... because it's too great.... but still tough... ummm.. beautiful poem... it sounds like your feeling the same way i'm feeling... but i can't find yoooooooou...
ReplyDeletei completely love that piece.. and your creativity... i think i will draw today
Interesting writing, conjures up memories of weddings and graduations.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite pixar is Up, because of the character development and message. The Incredibles is a close second...because I'm a sucker for superhero movies and that one is pretty much the cleanest in the genre. :)
wrote that super late the other night kind of sporadically. Has a few meanings for me.
ReplyDeleteUP is amazing. and the incredibles is amazing… so is monsters inc. and toy story is great… ahhh they are all wonderful. but i definitely will put 'a bug's life' at the bottom of the list. agree?
this was one of my very favorites!
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